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Offline ebooksjunkie

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Any feedback on this?
« on: October 06, 2014, 03:06:23 PM »
http://companymobilesite.info/ev

What do you guys think of the sales page?
Was there enough info provided for someone to make a buying decision?

Does anyone know or have any PLR articles on this ebola virus?

Also I'm looking for affiliates so please let me know if you wish to promote.

Regards



Offline snginc

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Re: Any feedback on this?
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2014, 03:17:52 PM »
I just sent you a link to some Ebola PLR.  Yeah there was enough to make a buying decision.  Remember its not just content on the salespage, its also about traffic generation and launch promotion.  This product has been out for 7 months but only has less than 10 sales.   Using the phrase

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This is a Limited Launch Offer! It May End At Anytime
   

and the product being out for 7 months doesnt make your offer look credible to me.  Just my observation.

You might want to check here http://www.cdc.gov/vhf/ebola/outbreaks/2014-west-africa/index.html to update your info on Ebola deaths.

Dont use acronyms that most people wouldnt know mean ie S.H.T.F. (which means crap hits the fan...the forum has a censor which doesnt allow you to post the word S H I T (without the spaces! learned something new today!)).  If are you going to use it you need to define it first (comes straight from report writing 101).

Jerome

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Re: Any feedback on this?
« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2014, 06:10:41 PM »
Sorry, but first thing I saw after opening the page was that awful video screen and my first impulse was to close the page. I just couldn't read the content after seeing that screen as a welcome to the page.

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Re: Any feedback on this?
« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2014, 09:00:22 PM »
Overall, I think you have a very handsome page. I think Jerome is on the mark and Korry's point is well taken.

I'd suggest a slight re-write on the copy and leave out the SHTf stuff. You might have less of a bounce rate with a bit of a blander graphic. The limited time stuff seems a bit off considering this epidemic is something many people need to know more about...and will for a long time.

The"urgency" would seem to more oriented towards avoidance of this disease. For people concerned about this sickness, there hardy seems to be a need for false urgency.

I am curious about the sales figures. Is this just a crappy guide? What do you think? With the timeliness of this subject, I wouldn't even pull PLR articles. Contemporary articles on this would almost write themselves.

Best of luck with this. - MM

Again, I really like the overall look and feel of the page very much.

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Re: Any feedback on this?
« Reply #4 on: February 15, 2015, 01:04:58 AM »
I Tried to go to the Website But when I clicked on the link, it took me to a search engine.  I could not get to your site. sorry.

Ranger1 :''(

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« Reply #5 on: February 15, 2015, 06:47:54 AM »
Welcome to the wonderful world of internet marketing Ranger1!  Domains dont always stay up for whatever reason, usually because the domain didnt get reregistered.  No reason for you to be sorry.  Besides this was an old thread anyway.

Jerome
I Tried to go to the Website But when I clicked on the link, it took me to a search engine.  I could not get to your site. sorry.

Ranger1 :''(