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Mickey

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Feedback appreciated
« on: September 26, 2010, 08:32:45 PM »
Hi All,

I've been tinkering with opt-in pages
and would appreciate any feedback you may have.

http://listbuildingstrategies.freereportprofits.com/optin-2/

http://listbuildingstrategies.freereportprofits.com/optin-3

Anything that you think might be a turn-off,
please let me know.

Thank you!

Mickey



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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #1 on: September 26, 2010, 11:46:07 PM »
Hi Mickey,

It looks pretty good to me.
Good job!  :cool:

~Karen



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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2010, 03:15:20 AM »
I, too, can't see any particular problems.

I'm a bit of a headline nerd myself and I would say:

Headline:

Discover How This Awesome Squeeze Page Generator Will Help Crank Out Squeeze Pages On Demand & Build You A Huge List of Subscribers!


I prefer the layout to page 2 rather than page 3 - love the check marks but page 3 is good because I can see the whole page without having to use the scrolling buttons.

You keep mentioning a 'free gift' I assume this is the software but it could be read that someone would expect the software plus a free gift
So, instead of this:
"Simply enter your email address so Iíll know where to send you the free gift."
you could say:
"Enter your email address for instant access to Squeeze Synergy"

As with everything online test, test and test again - I would suggest you drive traffic to both pages as they are and see which results in more signups, then change just one thing and republish, and keep tweaking and republishing until you've built your huge subscriber list - then do it all over again  :laugh:

Hope that helps

Val

Henley

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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #3 on: September 27, 2010, 06:55:42 AM »
If you kill the blank lines between the labels and the input boxes on the Opt-in Form, you will move it more into line of sight.

You could also either make the image a little smaller or move it up slightly, to move the Opt-in Form more visible.

Anything you can do to focus attention on the input area of your Opt-in Form helps - make it as visible as possible.

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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #4 on: September 27, 2010, 10:33:25 AM »
Great job Mickey ... I can't think of anything more I could say that Dom & Henley haven't mentioned.

Mickey

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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #5 on: September 27, 2010, 06:45:19 PM »
A big thanks to you guys.  :::tu

I've made the changes, except for re-sizing the graphic.

That's for tomorrow. I'm such a dunce when it comes
to altering graphics so I need to allow for extra time.

Pleased you liked it, Karen.   ;D  It gives me a little boost
to know that all the time I've spent learning how to
do this stuff is paying off.




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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #6 on: December 23, 2010, 12:53:14 PM »
Henley,

Looks to me like you're on the right track.  You've also received some great feedback from the others.

I see that Henley suggested that you maybe make the graphic smaller, and I agree. I think it will look better smaller.

I also note that you mentioned it takes you a while to do stuff like that because you say you're a "dunce" when it comes to that. First of all, no, you're not a dunce.

So, here's a "trick" for you...and for anyone else who doesn't have skills to alter graphics. (I'm one of them, by the way.)

If you know how to find a graphic/jpg that's already on your computer and know how to upload and then copy and insert, this is for you.

Shrinkpictures  http://www.shrinkpictures.com

I absolutely, positively love it and use it all the time when I need to resize a photo/jpg/gif.  You just upload your jpg to their site. They have different sizes you can use to resize your photo to. You are able to see your resized photo to see if that's what you want to use. If it is, you copy, save as. If it's not, you "remove" it and try again.

Your resized jpg will stay on their site about two hours and is then automatically deleted...in case you forget to remove it

Good luck.

Karen

Mickey

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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #7 on: December 31, 2010, 10:20:44 AM »
Karen,

Thank you very much for the link!

Mickey

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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #8 on: December 31, 2010, 04:40:43 PM »
Karen,

Thank you very much for the link!

Mickey

Mickey,

You're welcome.

And "Henley", I see that I attributed your name to my post upthread (in my salutation), and you weren't even expressing a question for anyone to answer. So I apologize for that.

Also, I can no longer see the "modify" option for blog posts that's why I added my apology response here.


Karen

Cal

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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #9 on: January 01, 2011, 04:37:33 AM »

Mickey

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Re: Feedback appreciated
« Reply #10 on: January 02, 2011, 11:24:28 AM »
Cal,

Thank you!

Your help is very much appreciated.


Mickey