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Cal

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::>> Need Review for service site....
« on: December 08, 2010, 01:32:58 PM »
Hi Everyone,
Hope all of you are ok and healthy and ready for holidays..
Please have a look at this sites and let me know if I can better them or the one that you like the most...

http://www.proecoverdesign.com/
http://www.pro-ecover-design.ca/
http://www.proecoverdesign.com/index1a.htm

or the design of this one

http://www.pro-ecover-design.biz/index.html

Make sure you guys visit the FREE download page... I got some nice goodies like promised for you  8)ss
 



Henley

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Re: ::>> Need Review for service site....
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2010, 02:23:25 PM »
I actually preferred what you showed us a few weeks ago.

I've sent you a PM with an image included.

I think you need something more basic.

Just give them a quick headline, and on the right have your rotating display of available formats.

Then under that have your various options across the page.

Try to keep as much as possible "Above the fold"

Use a simpler headline, and if you want to keep the pizza analogy, try ...

Guru Style Graphics                          ROTATING
At LESS Than Pizza Prices          IMAGES GO HERE

Option1      Option2     Option3    Option4




Keep it as simple as possible.

Let the quality of your graphics do the selling for you.

Less is more for the type of service you are trying to provide.


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Re: ::>> Need Review for service site....
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2010, 07:17:06 PM »
Hey Cal,

You have obviously put a lot of thought and effort into your websites.  I would have to echo Henley's comment about too much white space above the fold on each of the sites.

On the .ca site there is a sidebar that is utilized only a short way down the page.  After scrolling past the part that is used then there is a blank area on the right that makes the page look off-center.

The .biz website loads slowly because of all the images.  If you could add a paragraph or two it would give the rest of the page time to load without it being obviously slow.

All-in-all they look pretty good.  Are you getting much traffic yet?
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Re: ::>> Need Review for service site....
« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2010, 10:35:13 AM »
Hi Cal,
I agree with most of the previous comments.

Adding my $.02 ...

I like the first one and the header/footer/page from the last one. Perhaps taking that layout and dropping in the content from the first would be a good combination.

My problem with the last one overall is the length and number of graphics. Like the first site you asked for feedback on I'm sticking with a seperate page or, as Henley mentioned, a slideshow style display that takes up less area.

I hope this is helpful.

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Re: ::>> Need Review for service site....
« Reply #4 on: December 12, 2010, 07:55:57 PM »
I like this one best: http://www.proecoverdesign.com/

kalgutman

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« Reply #5 on: December 20, 2010, 04:03:07 AM »
Hi Cal

I actually like the design of pro-ecover-design.biz/index.html and your copy has to be short across the page (really short so that people do not have to move there eyes across the screen without effort).

You need to have move paragraphs and longer copy. Don't forget bullet points and subheaders in bold etc.

Do not add widgets or anything that distracts the movement down the page etc (for the sales page/landing page/offer page only.

I hope this helps, :)

Kal

ContentWriter

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« Reply #6 on: December 20, 2010, 05:41:12 AM »
I put my vote in for http://www.pro-ecover-design.biz/index.html

It's very eye-catching and looks very professional.

~Karen

kalgutman

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Re: ::>> Need Review for service site....
« Reply #7 on: December 20, 2010, 02:13:35 PM »
Hi Karen,

Eye catching does work that's for sure!  :)

It makes for a great start.

Kal

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Re: ::>> Need Review for service site....
« Reply #8 on: December 20, 2010, 04:52:01 PM »
I agree with Karen on liking this one: http://www.pro-ecover-design.biz/index.html.

And, I would make your graphics smaller of all the things you can do: the ebook covers, the can, etc.  To me, they're really pretty large.


Karen

Cal

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Re: ::>> Need Review for service site....
« Reply #9 on: December 26, 2010, 05:19:37 PM »
Hi Everyone,
Hope all of you are ok and healthy and ready for holidays..
Please have a look at this sites and let me know if I can better them or the one that you like the most...

http://www.proecoverdesign.com/
http://www.pro-ecover-design.ca/
http://www.proecoverdesign.com/index1a.htm

or the design of this one

http://www.pro-ecover-design.biz/index.html

Make sure you guys visit the FREE download page... I got some nice goodies like promised for you  8)ss

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Thank You all for the review... Hope all of you and family had a good Christmas time.. Wish you all a Happy New Year....

By the way have a look on this last site...
http://www.pro-ecover-design.biz/pro2
 


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Re: ::>> Need Review for service site....
« Reply #10 on: December 26, 2010, 11:54:11 PM »
Hi Cal-- love the site. I'm pretty sure "Miscelenios" is not spelled right. Did you mean miscellaneous? (I just got it wrong-glad there's spellchecker in here.)

I'd like to see a call to action. What's the next step? Don't make people guess. Maybe put an appropriate contact form at the bottom of the page asking about your prospect's project and what makes it special.

Who owns the copyright of the finished product?

Anyway, great site. Best of luck with it. - MM