New Guide for Review

[Donald]

Hi MM,

I had a quick look, not as thorough as Dom...lol. I would  use the footer, your link to the trial. Potential subscribers might want to click the link at the outset. I have in the past not bother reading all of the squeeze page and go straight to the link. Something about the images....not sure, some too close to each other!! Otherwise good to go bud.

Your P.S. at the bottom. No gap between the'a' and 'credit'.

 Good work mate.

Donald

 

[magicman]

You guys are awesome!! I've mads some changes, but had to print one today for a presentation tomorrow. I'll keep working on it.

Love to you guys - MM

[magicman]

Hi, all -

Just to kind of wrap this subject up...Thank you all again for your incredibly valuable feedback. In fact, I may print this out and use it as a checklist for future publications.

Great stuff! Much gratitude. - MM

[ckoch]

that had me histerical as did dom's response i chase shiny things all day long.  speaking of shiny things are you offering this to our group with plr mm?  i need u to.  its faantastic

Magicman - You packed a lot into a short report.  There's a lot of good stuff in there.  I echo most of Dom's critiques, though I'm not typically attentive enough to notice as many things as he did, so I'd use his words as a guide for revision.

I do have one little thing to add, though.  Something about the way the pixels showed up on my screen (I probably need to clean it) spoke of "the otter".  Well, I've read more than a few WSOs in the last year or so, and I never heard of "the otter" in IM.  I'm thinking, "maybe he'll talk about teaching the client how to get his/her own fish, or how to be playful while doing work, or maybe just how win customers by being cute and loveable." (That is your secret, isn't it, MM?)  But alas, what it said was, "the offer".  It was a very good point, but interesting to me that my error wound up to be a pattern interrupt which got me off on a whole new tangent.  Gotta go,  just saw a shiny thing...

[jws321]

Great guide!

[magicman]

that had me histerical as did dom's response i chase shiny things all day long.  speaking of shiny things are you offering this to our group with plr mm?  i need u to.  its faantastic

Magicman - You packed a lot into a short report.  There's a lot of good stuff in there.  I echo most of Dom's critiques, though I'm not typically attentive enough to notice as many things as he did, so I'd use his words as a guide for revision.

I do have one little thing to add, though.  Something about the way the pixels showed up on my screen (I probably need to clean it) spoke of "the otter".  Well, I've read more than a few WSOs in the last year or so, and I never heard of "the otter" in IM.  I'm thinking, "maybe he'll talk about teaching the client how to get his/her own fish, or how to be playful while doing work, or maybe just how win customers by being cute and loveable." (That is your secret, isn't it, MM?)  But alas, what it said was, "the offer".  It was a very good point, but interesting to me that my error wound up to be a pattern interrupt which got me off on a whole new tangent.  Gotta go,  just saw a shiny thing...

Clair - I just saw your post today (Sorry for the delay). I'll see if I can make it work. I'll have to make a few revisions. I'll see what I can do. I'm very flattered by your request. Thank you. - MM

[valpubs]

Howdy Folks

I have just written a 20 page report on 'Mindset' and I'm looking for 4 reviewers to give me a critique - your opinions will be used as testimonials on my sales page (if you want).

I'm not brave enough to go 'public' like Magicman so, please PM me if you want your testimonial on my page.

The site has not gone live yet so I have no traffic.

Your help would be appreciated.

Cheers

Dom

[snginc]

Dom I will help you out!

[valpubs]

Dom I will help you out!

Thanks Jerome - details on their way

[snginc]

great!