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New Website Design & New Offers
« on: September 06, 2012, 11:21:06 PM »
Hey Gang,

I'm not really very good at accepting feedback, but I wanted to let you know about my new website design. I chose a very simple theme and it's not been optimized yet.

It's mainly for show and a place to direct people with whom I speak (if they ask if I have a website - I don't think you must have one to make it). When I do direct mail or other advertising, it's also a place to direct them to special offers. The home page is basically nothing but offers - all but one free. The "Lead" - obviously - is mobile.

I think it's clean and lean and represents well. If you go to www.magicmanconsulting.com, you can form your own opinion. If you visit, please click through to the offer in the first copy block on the home page. It will take your to my first-ever attempt at a sales page on a WP these that doesn't really mirror the theme. It's a feature of this theme that I really like.

When you see the mobile revolution graphics, those are all original.

Well, that's it for now.



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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2012, 12:19:39 AM »
Hey MM,

   I really like the design it is very sharp, plain and to the point. It really looks super in my eys I did not go threw the whole thing but about 4 pages.
   Nice Job.....
Bill Brooks    hillsborowd@gmail.com

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2012, 03:55:05 AM »
Edgar

I really like the site, you have done a great job there!

The title with the phone number really hits you even before the page loads.

Well done

Keep it up & good luck

Brian

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2012, 10:22:32 AM »
Thanks Bill and Brian --- A lot of work went into the simple, clean design, Glad you're as comfortable with it as I am. Again, thanks - MM

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #4 on: September 07, 2012, 01:41:39 PM »
I like it. Your opening message is all above the fold--hard to do so I congratulate you on that.

I agree with Bill & Brian: Nice, clean design. No distracting clutter. Easy to navigate the site.

Good job!

~Karen

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2012, 02:32:58 PM »
Edgar

That's an excellent site, congratulations.

On the separate sales page (I like it BTW), under the 3 phone graphic you have a line of text 'Es lebe die Revolution' - does that mean you can offer the service in Spanish or was it just a quote? If it's a quote then tell who contributed it.

I'm liking the site's layout more and more - it's almost HTML-like  and I'll like it even more once there's content on all the pages.

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2012, 02:53:53 PM »
Very nice design, clean and simple is exactly what customers like, and of course I love video so that is bonus in my eyes.

I see this is white at the bottom under 2012 Magicman Consulting | 720-980-8010 Responsive Theme powered by WordPress

    This could be the Windows x86 version of this blog (FireFox)
    General Results Only: No
    Create query_vars: No
    Standard 0: responsive/home.php (active)
    Template 1: /home/magicman/public_html/magicmanconsulting.com/wp-content/themes/responsive/home.php
    Theme 2: /home/magicman/public_html/magicmanconsulting.com/wp-content/themes/responsive/home.php

I am using FireFox.

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2012, 03:20:02 PM »
Lookin' good there, MM.

You've certainly put in a lot of work on your site and you ought to be proud of it.

Now, at the risk of sounding a bif fussy, I suggest that for your visitors/readers to get a copy of your Google book, you have them opt-in by leaving their first name and email address. 

Karen

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #8 on: September 07, 2012, 07:04:30 PM »
Thanks for the continuing feedback. I'm starting to feel better and better. I guess all the lessons in this forum and RRW are sinking in.

Dom - It's Spanish, as you probably know, for Long Live the Revolution. I don't offer anything in Spanish...I just like how it adds tot he revolution theme.

Karen - Thank you. I picked this theme (free) for the home page layout. You uncovered my evil purpose of drawing in with the first paragraph. You're right, of course, about the opt-in. I'm seeing how it plays without it. But I think you're right. I'll probably add it or...make it an option just below. I'm moving towards high level permission marketing.

Mlane- Thanks for the feedback. Not experienced enough to know what it means, but I'll check it out. Appreciate your comments. - MM

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #9 on: October 02, 2012, 10:44:15 PM »
Hi Edgar,

You've done a good job of theme. It looks really neat and tidy. I also agree with Karen about using your google book for the optin. Video marketing is hot at the moment and is growing day by day so well done on that!

Just a small typo that I noticed on your home page under the "Free Video Course" I think it should be "our video course..." and not "out"

Besides that, it looks really good, Well done!

Mo

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Re: New Website Design & New Offers
« Reply #10 on: October 06, 2012, 01:17:04 AM »
Wanted to pop in, catch up and thank you for the comments (you all were very easy on me!!). Good catch, Mo. Thanks. I'll fix it forthwith. -MM