OK, How's This For A New Landing Page?

[magicman]

Please let me know what you think. Thanks.-MM

http://trackr.leadsleap.com/Free-Cash-Kits/RRWForum

[Jim Burney]

Hi MM

  Your landing page, especially the second part.
Cannot recall seeing one like that.

No doubt others will comment on this point, but I likeeee!

Christmas Blessings

Jim

[magicman]

Thanks, Jim - We'll see how it performs. Christmas Blessings back at ya.-MM

[magicman]

Here's a new version to split test---

http://trackr.leadsleap.com/075y6d14

Magicman says...."check it out."

[seeqer]

Please let me know what you think. Thanks.-MM

http://trackr.leadsleap.com/Free-Cash-Kits/RRWForum

You need to put the emphasis on the BENEFITS. This, explain a lot better what you are offer than the other one but you do not go in details.

You are assuming that everyone see the benefits in this. Also some people are tired or burdened by their problems and may lack the intellectual energy to put the pieces together. You need to spell it out clearly.

The characters are too small. You need to make the main content easier to read.

It is true that anyone can modify the size of the content in the browers but the vast majority of people will move on.

Also leaving a sample of this cash kit to display the quality of your work, will help a lot. Otherwise this could feel as a gamble for the customers. In this day and age of spamming and fishing people will be careful about giving their email adress

[magicman]

Again - Seegar - thank you so much for your comments.