Hi ~Karen,
I have some comments regarding your sales page.
1. I love, absolutely love those little babies!!!!
2. Your font size seems to be all over the place. I suggest you choose 1 or 2 sizes and use those throughout.
3. I also suggest that you "bullet point" or "check mark" your points in the two sections.
i.e. "Finding a work at home opportunity" etc. (Those 8 points.)
Also in the part where you're listing the helpful information materials like "Ebooks", etc.
4. For your testimonial by Victoria (and others you might include later), if it's possible, I suggest you add her website urls right after her name in the box instead of putting that information outside, under the box:
Like:
Victoria
Owner and creator of
Young Work At Home Moms & Giveaways4Mom.
5. Is it correct to assume or think that somewhere here you're going to say who you are/who has this site and why you are asking people to sign up for the WAHM Club? (If I'm joining a club or a site, I want to know who's running it and/or who wants my money.)
6. Your membership price seems more than fair, although I'm wondering if you might want to make that a monthly fee instead of a one-time payment. On the other hand, you could then consider making the monthly fee a lesser amount.
Really good stuff, ~Karen.
Karen