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Michael75065

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like feed back or critique
« on: March 05, 2011, 01:02:29 PM »
I love to know what you think of my 1st ever blog if any improvement I need to do.

 Successwithmichael is my 1st ever blog I ever made

 I don't know if I am a loud to leave my blog link on here or not.



Offline KarenMcG

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Re: like feed back or critique
« Reply #1 on: March 05, 2011, 11:01:40 PM »
Hi Michael ::P

 :welcome: to RRW.

It's nice to meet you.

I looked at your blog. I think it's looking pretty good.

I do have some comments.

I'm curious about your header. Is it supposed to signify anything specific?

You have a Home page and an About page. Perhaps you could also add a "contact" page. You do provide your telephone number on your About page, but I think it would be nice to include either a contact form or your email address on a separate page.  And maybe your photo on your about page.

Also, in your Submission form where you can get your free report, your submission button says "sign me in". I'm wondering what that means. Does "sign me in" mean you're submitting your name to get the free report. Or does it mean you're "logging in" to a membership-type site.  I'm assuming it's you're submitting your name to get the report.

I'm also thinking you might want to include a brief statement underneath your "sign me in" to say something like "your privacy is important to us, we do not buy or sell your name and email address." Or some other wording to let people know you do not give out email addresses.

I also see on your posts that some of them are kind of long on the home/front page. Perhaps you could have 2 or 3 paragraphs and then use the "more" button so it goes onto a page by itself.

With your posts, I notice, too, that your font sizes are different in the same posts, and so are the colors of the print. It might look better to have your posts all the same, except if you're quoting someone or have something similar from some other site or literature.

Maybe you could also at some point add a calendar in your right sidebar.

You've got a really good concept, I think, and some good topics already, as well. Perhaps you can get to a point soon where you can post more than once a month or so.

And finally, after each post, I'd add your name as a signature. And give your reader a call to action of some sort.

Karen


Michael75065

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Re: like feed back or critique
« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2011, 01:29:33 PM »
Thank you for replying to my post and I would love to learn from you and maybe be coached


I thank you so much for kind advice and please keep in touch
Michael Ladd New on the block.

email on here again with any good advice
also on skype Mike75065

cmarin

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Re: like feed back or critique
« Reply #3 on: March 15, 2011, 03:02:35 PM »
That kicks man! Nice job. Why can't you put your link up? How is anybody going to tell you what they think if they can't go look at it. I took a second to look it up so I found it no problem. www.successwithmichael.com

lindame

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Re: like feed back or critique
« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2011, 03:10:22 PM »
Michael,

A good-looking site.

I'm assuming that the mountain in your header is meant to be the mountain of rejection/learning that we have to climb to be successful in online business. Aside from that, Karen's given you excellent advice. 

I will be looking back in on your site now and then to see what you've done (added).

Best of luck.
Linda