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promomxr

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Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« on: February 20, 2010, 09:10:58 AM »
To ContentWriter - I have this to say
 - you might be bad with your words of rhyme
but you best get on your knees and pray
 - cause you met you match this time.

I written rhyme all my life, in poetry and song
 - and even life itself to me has a rhythum or beat
So to challenge me you'll soon find your wrong
- and sooner or later you'll have to admit...
                                flatheartedly, you've been beat!

I can even change the tempo midstream
to add variety to the theme
cause what I do I do best
and I will always stand out from the rest.

And by the way, I have a working lighter
and would be happy to light your smoke
While you wimper and cry and give it a toke?
Why?
I am the Master of Rhyme - and that' no joke!



rakeitin

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Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2010, 11:07:26 AM »
As Master of Rhyme I hate to say
There's always someone in the way
Your words of bravado may do you in
Like an Ali punch to your chin.

His master boxing brought him to heights
That made Liston & Foreman turn out their lights
So even with your great tempo and beat
Even Tiger got tamed on his own street.

His tempo though boring, cause it's the same
And may not sound as sweet to the ear
Rooting for ContentWriter, may be lame
Your high flying tokes will not work here.


valpubs

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Re: Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2010, 11:25:02 AM »
Howard said "She over-rated!"
K. said he was out-dated
Strange as it goes
They both had bad flows
Now there is me, unrelated!



It's pure crud - but it's a start

ContentWriter

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Re: Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2010, 01:13:13 PM »
Well what is this
ye all have started
you've not learned your lesson
you've been outsmarted

So you've done this all
of your life you say
but you're not much older
than I oh, no way

I started out shy
as a child told, "keep quiet"
but this curse I've outgrown
and now I'm a riot

I held it all in
for year after year
'till a doctor told me
you're bipolar my dear

So now I have
the greatest excuse
for acting just like I'm a
silly ol' goose

Just give me my meds
and I'll earn my day's pay
high as kite, yet OK with the Feds
isn't this a lovely day!

Coffin nails as they often say
are the things that I smoke
not that nasty MJ
that junk only makes me choke

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Re: Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« Reply #4 on: February 21, 2010, 08:55:23 AM »
Been on this forum for such a long time.
However,  I'm having trouble finding words that rhyme.
Ha! Just realized why I'm so inept.  :thinking:
When it comes to words I'm out of my depth.:'(

*duh* *duh* *duh* Cannot believe I just did that ::!::

Back to the grindstone

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Re: Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« Reply #5 on: February 21, 2010, 12:48:03 PM »
Been on this forum for such a long time.
However,  I'm having trouble finding words that rhyme.
Ha! Just realized why I'm so inept.  :thinking:
When it comes to words I'm out of my depth.:'(

*duh* *duh* *duh* Cannot believe I just did that ::!::

Back to the grindstone


Jim

Bravo! There's rhyme and then there's rhyme!

Karen

P.S. Move along everyone, no rhyming here. ;D

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Re: Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« Reply #6 on: February 21, 2010, 12:49:53 PM »
As Master of Rhyme I hate to say
There's always someone in the way
Your words of bravado may do you in
Like an Ali punch to your chin.

His master boxing brought him to heights
That made Liston & Foreman turn out their lights
So even with your great tempo and beat
Even Tiger got tamed on his own street.

His tempo though boring, cause it's the same
And may not sound as sweet to the ear
Rooting for ContentWriter, may be lame
Your high flying tokes will not work here.



Bob,

Now that's some good rhyming there. You've got a knack.

Karen

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Re: Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« Reply #7 on: February 22, 2010, 07:13:07 AM »
As Master of Rhyme I hate to say
There's always someone in the way
Your words of bravado may do you in
Like an Ali punch to your chin.

His master boxing brought him to heights
That made Liston & Foreman turn out their lights
So even with your great tempo and beat
Even Tiger got tamed on his own street.

His tempo though boring, cause it's the same
And may not sound as sweet to the ear
Rooting for ContentWriter, may be lame
Your high flying tokes will not work here.



Bob

Another good contender for a prize.

Great effort

Jim

promomxr

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Re: Battle of the Rhymes - Want To Join In?
« Reply #8 on: February 22, 2010, 07:25:52 AM »
Hmmm is there a niche here?  :dollar:

You all are great - keep them coming!