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My First Review Site.
« on: September 18, 2012, 09:58:10 AM »
Hi Folks,

My first review site. Do tell me what you think. A couple of things to do, but it's online the noo.

Donald

http://www.learnhowtoprofitfromplr.com


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« Reply #1 on: September 18, 2012, 01:35:50 PM »
It all looks good and reads extremely well. 
I don't know if you are past that stage already, but the logo looks just a little bit squeezed, as if your logo was really 268 pix and all you were allotted was 200.  That's just a feeling, not a criticism.  Total effect, you scored 100 out of 100.
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« Reply #2 on: September 18, 2012, 01:56:34 PM »
I think you are selling too cheap. I was surprised to see it so low,  I think a minimum of $9.99.
From $97-$5? Seems to me...as a customer, like it won't be very good. 

Aside from that, looks good!

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« Reply #3 on: September 18, 2012, 02:48:28 PM »
Donald

A good review - clear and succinct and not too heavy on the 'sales' talk.

I did find the sub-heading of 'John Thornhill' a little random - until I read on a little. It might be better to 'qualify' his name by retitling the paragraph 'Introducing the creator .. John Thornhill'

Good job though

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« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2012, 04:12:07 PM »
Hey Donald,

   
      Looks really good I have to agree with everyone the site looks good. But I also agree with mlane that the price is really too low that 9.99 might be a lot better priced.   
Bill Brooks    hillsborowd@gmail.com

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« Reply #5 on: September 18, 2012, 06:13:50 PM »
That's very interesting - Bill, Mary; based on the review and the price alone - would either of you buy this product at $5.00?

I have to admit, if it were me, I'd go for it - $5.00 is 'losable' if the product didn't stack up and an excellent investment if the product is all it lives up to be.

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« Reply #6 on: September 18, 2012, 07:57:35 PM »
Hi Donald.

The product page on your review site seems fair enough, but I question whether the actual product you link to, is the best one you could promote. I clicked through to the sales page, a WSO from Sept 2011, and there are some pretty negative comments that might negate the effects of all the sales copy previous to that.

The fact that this is a product that was launched in 2009 doesn't sit well with me. As a consumer, I would probably look for something more current, even if it is only $5.00, which at that price point, would raise some quality concerns for me.

At $5.00, you'd have to sell a whack of them to make even a little bit of money, and I'm not sure that the market for this particular WSO hasn't already dried up.

I believe that here at RRW in the Gold section, there are more current and preferable products that you could promote and even increase the price point as well, on that domain.

Sorry for this response, but it's only my opinion, and I could be wrong. Just know that I do have your best interests at heart . . .

Al

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My first review site. Do tell me what you think. A couple of things to do, but it's online the noo.

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« Reply #7 on: September 19, 2012, 10:15:04 AM »
Hello,

The first thing I wondered was if you actually used the product yourself? That is usually the thing I question when someone I don't know is trying to sell to me. From the look of your site, I don't know who you are, who John is, and how you even used the product(if you even did). With all of that being said I wouldn't even look twice at the offer and I would move on no matter the price.

Now I tell you how you would make me buy from that site. If you yourself were visible I would be more inclined to listen if I saw you as a real person. If I read about how you actually used the plr you are trying to sell to me I might be more inclined to take you more at your word and take a chance on the project. I'm talking about actual posts about the plr and not just a crafted sales letter. I'll be honest when I see sales letters my eyes glaze over and I stop reading them.

Just seeing you from this forum, I know you know what you're talking about when it comes to plr. If I were you I would focus on educating people on how you use plr and this site. I would make my product either the resell rights weekly affiliate program or individual plr that I have used. A person that does a great, and I mean great job selling enormous amount of affiliate products and services just by sharing how he uses them is Pat Flynn at http://www.smartpassiveincome.com/   

He could sell more products if he wanted i am sure, but he only sells what he uses. He does this by explaining how he uses the product. People trust in him because he uses the product, but he goes further than that. He will even help you with the product and stands behind the products as if they were is alone. I have bought from him simply because he has shown me how to use the product, helps with the product if needed, and he actually uses the products himself. 

I'm gonna stop here because I don't want to be negative or anything. I do have some other ideas though. If interested in those just pm me.

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Re: My First Review Site.
« Reply #8 on: September 19, 2012, 06:22:55 PM »
Hi Talewins,

You're right it is. Was giving me grief trying to sort it..lol. Will get it fixed, just desperate to get online. Thanks again.....

Regards

Donald

It all looks good and reads extremely well. 
I don't know if you are past that stage already, but the logo looks just a little bit squeezed, as if your logo was really 268 pix and all you were allotted was 200.  That's just a feeling, not a criticism.  Total effect, you scored 100 out of 100.

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« Reply #9 on: September 19, 2012, 06:28:32 PM »
Dom,

Thanks for that. As the review was quite short and I wanted to get a H2 tag in the review, thought to use John's. I was going to put a page about the author on the review, but like I said wanted to get it up. I will change accordingly.

Mlane, product was created by John Thornhill. The original price is $97.00, the $5.00 is a WSO special. Thanks for the feedback. Going to do a few more of them in slow time.

Regards

Donald


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A good review - clear and succinct and not too heavy on the 'sales' talk.

I did find the sub-heading of 'John Thornhill' a little random - until I read on a little. It might be better to 'qualify' his name by retitling the paragraph 'Introducing the creator .. John Thornhill'

Good job though

I think you are selling too cheap. I was surprised to see it so low,  I think a minimum of $9.99.
From $97-$5? Seems to me...as a customer, like it won't be very good. 

Aside from that, looks good!

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« Reply #10 on: September 19, 2012, 06:42:22 PM »
Hi Al,

Sorry, don't be mate. I decided on reviews only in the last couple of weeks. Was watching videos, reading some material on the subject. I bought the product soon after it came out. It's an excellent product and I learned a lot from it. For 5 bucks I still reckon a newbie would benefit. Al, I'm using this as a learning curve for product reviews, I picked it up at randon, plus I bought the domain 3 years ago to use as an affiliate. Not long since I paid for another year..lol.

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Hi Donald.

The product page on your review site seems fair enough, but I question whether the actual product you link to, is the best one you could promote. I clicked through to the sales page, a WSO from Sept 2011, and there are some pretty negative comments that might negate the effects of all the sales copy previous to that.

The fact that this is a product that was launched in 2009 doesn't sit well with me. As a consumer, I would probably look for something more current, even if it is only $5.00, which at that price point, would raise some quality concerns for me.

At $5.00, you'd have to sell a whack of them to make even a little bit of money, and I'm not sure that the market for this particular WSO hasn't already dried up.

I believe that here at RRW in the Gold section, there are more current and preferable products that you could promote and even increase the price point as well, on that domain.

Sorry for this response, but it's only my opinion, and I could be wrong. Just know that I do have your best interests at heart . . .

Al

Hi Folks,

My first review site. Do tell me what you think. A couple of things to do, but it's online the noo.

Donald

http://www.learnhowtoprofitfromplr.com


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Re: My First Review Site.
« Reply #11 on: September 19, 2012, 06:49:10 PM »
Hi Paul,

Thanks for the feedback. I take all you have said. I have used the product, taught me quite a lot. In fact any product I have bought I use, play about with until I get used to it. It's a learning experience for me. I spent too long in buying products and doing very little. I have now stopped buying and put the little I have learned to good use. That's why I decide to do a review site.

Thanks for the feedback folks.

Regards

Donald

Hello,

The first thing I wondered was if you actually used the product yourself? That is usually the thing I question when someone I don't know is trying to sell to me. From the look of your site, I don't know who you are, who John is, and how you even used the product(if you even did). With all of that being said I wouldn't even look twice at the offer and I would move on no matter the price.

Now I tell you how you would make me buy from that site. If you yourself were visible I would be more inclined to listen if I saw you as a real person. If I read about how you actually used the plr you are trying to sell to me I might be more inclined to take you more at your word and take a chance on the project. I'm talking about actual posts about the plr and not just a crafted sales letter. I'll be honest when I see sales letters my eyes glaze over and I stop reading them.

Just seeing you from this forum, I know you know what you're talking about when it comes to plr. If I were you I would focus on educating people on how you use plr and this site. I would make my product either the resell rights weekly affiliate program or individual plr that I have used. A person that does a great, and I mean great job selling enormous amount of affiliate products and services just by sharing how he uses them is Pat Flynn at http://www.smartpassiveincome.com/   

He could sell more products if he wanted i am sure, but he only sells what he uses. He does this by explaining how he uses the product. People trust in him because he uses the product, but he goes further than that. He will even help you with the product and stands behind the products as if they were is alone. I have bought from him simply because he has shown me how to use the product, helps with the product if needed, and he actually uses the products himself. 

I'm gonna stop here because I don't want to be negative or anything. I do have some other ideas though. If interested in those just pm me.

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« Reply #12 on: September 20, 2012, 06:37:15 AM »
Your site is pretty good and have some useful information dear, I like it very much.
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« Reply #13 on: December 05, 2012, 04:22:06 AM »
Your first page expression not leaves a good impact on me. The format is simple without any navigation bar. Add more pages and friendly template to looks attractive according the niche. Except articles, there is nothing on your site. What function you have to perform? Site background and theme should be more attractive.

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« Reply #14 on: December 05, 2012, 11:34:34 AM »
Hi Lopez,

Welcome to the forum and thanks for your feedback. I need to change the header back to the original one I had on before. And mention about the creator of the product. I'm practising reviews...

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Donald