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New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« on: December 16, 2014, 03:39:19 PM »
Hi -

This is my best effort to date to put together a hybrid sales video. This is the update on the old "Bum Marketing" idea. So most of the video is a tutorial with a link to an affiliate offer at the end.



Whaddaya think? Thanks - MM

Program used: Video Spin Blaster Pro. My voice, my slides, my ecover design (which the author asked if he could use on his sales letter...cool, huh?)



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Re: New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« Reply #1 on: December 16, 2014, 05:30:50 PM »
Hey MM,

I like the video and I like your voice. Comes across as very trustworthy. Not hypy ... but rather it makes me feel comfortable with the video narrator.  It comes across as a person who I wouldn't mind buying from. My only concern is the video length. I wonder, as a sales video perhaps it should be a little bit shorter, or tighter?

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Mark

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Re: New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« Reply #2 on: December 16, 2014, 08:19:37 PM »
Many thanks, Mark, for the feedback. It's very helpful.-MM

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Re: New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« Reply #3 on: December 16, 2014, 10:38:22 PM »
I'm not sure the length is all that bad, but what it needs is a faster ramp to the real value. If I know I am getting something worthwhile I don't mind the length, but you need to convince me it's going to be worth it much earlier in the presentation.

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Re: New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« Reply #4 on: December 17, 2014, 12:44:28 AM »
Thanks OldBuddy - I agree, you make a great point. So, I'm hearing some benefits should  be loaded up front with a swift uptake...snd then the lessons bam,bam,bam! Do I have it?

Also are the slides with pictures, words, and all keepers? Value added?

MM

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« Reply #5 on: December 17, 2014, 01:34:48 AM »
I am far from an expert on these matters, just expressing my own opinion on how it struck me. At least have a teaser on what we can expect in a few minutes to lead us down the path to the good stuff. Hey they even do that on the Evening News to get us to stick around for the commercial to get over.

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Re: New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« Reply #6 on: December 17, 2014, 06:43:29 AM »
Hi Edgar

Congratulations on your video.

Your voice is as convincing as any marketer I've listened to.

If you wait for perfection you will never start, so go for it, you are in with a fighting chance.

Jim

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Re: New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« Reply #7 on: December 17, 2014, 10:56:19 PM »
OLdBuddy and Jim--

I appreciate the feedback.

Jim - thanks for the comment about the voice. Even though I've done some radio commercial before, I've been reluctant to tape my voice for videos --- for, seemingly no good reason.

Thanks, again, all! - MM


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Re: New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« Reply #8 on: December 18, 2014, 07:04:43 PM »
Hi Edgar,

Nice one mate, impressed. It took me a few seconds to realise it was you talking. Need to have a Skype chat at some point.

Donald

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« Reply #9 on: December 18, 2014, 09:58:05 PM »
Thanks, Donald. Love to chat! -MM

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Re: New Sales Video ///// Please Check Out }}}}
« Reply #10 on: December 21, 2014, 01:34:27 AM »
Update: Back to the drawing board and "tightened up" the production...down to just over 9 minutes (about a 50% reduction). So I think this one is ready for prime time. CRANK UP the promotion machine...get it lubed up with snake oil - or is it Kama Sutra love oik? Could make a difference. It's the vibes, you dig? Get back to ya'll.